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Dreaming of You by ~Silentprussian:iconSilentprussian:

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I loved drawing this picture, even though it was inspired by severe lack of sleep :P
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~cinnibon Mar 13, 2006, 11:25:55 AM
you need to work on the mucles in the arms a bit... theres barley any mucle there and the bones must be twigs! plus the hand needs to be a smodge larger... the arm under the pillow looks fine...and the rest of the body... the neck... torso... legs... chest area.... all look pretty good. the only thing you need to work on is the line quality (not so much really... a good inking pen would do it...) and the quality of the color... try getting 3 diffrent shades of the same color (for colored pencil) and mix them... your shading seems to br in the correct places... but shade with color... not with a regular pencil i hope this helps. and hope you don't mind an advanced crit.

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i got my kity kap !! yay!! :glomp:
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~NekoKyo1 Mar 13, 2006, 12:10:09 PM
i think everything is good in this one i mean the hand maybe alittle off but hard are alittle hard to do i mean ever i can do them right and all the line i think are a good thing kind of give it your on little touch in away

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when you seen a tentacle monster dont fear he will not hurt you just throw a school girl to it and all well be ok XD


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~Silentprussian Mar 13, 2006, 12:16:53 PM
I don't mind at all, it's great getting suggestions on how to improve from another person. I'll try that, thank you so much for taking the time to write that :glomp:
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~Silentprussian Mar 13, 2006, 12:18:19 PM
Hands are one of the worst things to draw, thanks :hug:
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~NekoKyo1 Mar 13, 2006, 12:27:55 PM
yah i know and your welcome anytime ;; hugs;;

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when you seen a tentacle monster dont fear he will not hurt you just throw a school girl to it and all well be ok XD


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~cinnibon Mar 13, 2006, 2:59:03 PM
i love it when peeps do that to me and thought i ought to return the favoor to somone who needed it.

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i got my kity kap !! yay!! :glomp:
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